Once upon a time there was a car. It had broken wheels and could not vroom. A dragon came and fixed the wheels. Then the car vroomed. The End.
I made be biased, but I think it is brilliant. It had characters, a conflict, suspense, and a great payoff at the end. I can't wait for the sequel!
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I can't help but feel like this story leaves me wanting more, which is what a good story should do. For example, where did the dragon come from? Where did he go? Does he have his own shop? Does he fix imports, or only domestic vehicles? Does he have a website? I look forward to reading all about it in Dragon Mechanic: Fire in the Belly.
I agree with Claire. I've been looking for a good trustworthy mechanic for years and would like to know more.
How much does he charge for an oil change?
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